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Old 02-02-2010, 01:50 PM
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Here's a poem I wrote Freshman year of High School. I have posted it on other sites, so I hope it's okay that I post it again here I am very proud of it and wanted to share it with all of you.

~*Once Again*~
If only they knew,
how hard it was,
to lose a friend,
and feel like it's the end,
to be unknown,
once again.
for people to stare at you,
and think you're a freak,
and then you feel weak,
once again.
when will this stop,
this moving around,
when can i be myself,
once again.
not worried about my feelings,
not worried about my looks,
not worrying where to sit at lunch,
once again.
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Quite good. Poem. rep+
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I can feel the emotion. How did you come about the idea? Was it a situation of personal experience?
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Old 02-06-2010, 02:05 AM
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I can feel the emotion. How did you come about the idea? Was it a situation of personal experience?
It was personal experience, yes. And thanks for the rep and great comments!!

I grew up with my mom and she was always running away from her problems so I had to move a lot and leave friends behind. It was hard going to so many new schools
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I even had this poem published in our school's journalism book. I still have it. I was in journalism class or something close to it, and I put together my own page Pictures and all
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